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rsfd
is 3% done
I don't like the writing style so far. It's like experiencing literature whiplash. Back-and-forth and back-and-forth. I'm having a hard time following the plot. I've already started over twice
— Oct 23, 2025 10:50AM
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rsfd
is 21% done
I still really don't like this writing style. I think the plot line might be good and the writing is technically good too. I don't like the style she's employed of constantly referring to something she will know in the future. It's getting tiresome and it's already very confusing. Not worth the headache.
— Oct 25, 2025 11:54PM
