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Lit Reader
is 82% done
It gets worse = it’s been 3 times in which Darcy has expressed the need to talk to Elizabeth’s father because of how bad town’s gossip has affected Elizabeth. And yet he didn’t do it… Duty Darcy who does what he ought and who is the Paragon of Proper Behaviour, doesn’t speak to Mr Bennet after it becomes public knowledge he compromised Elizabeth. Does this make sense to you??
— Oct 24, 2025 06:27AM
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Lit Reader
is 86% done
The repetitiveness and the chaotic involuntary time jumps are A MESS !
This is the second near identical scene where Elizabeth refuses Darcy’s proposal made because of demands upon his honour. It’s been MONTHS, supposedly, in which Darcy has been procrastinating any decisive action because of dishonourable gossip (months & months at Netherfield), enough for Hurst to do a full makeover & turn into a fitness buff
— Oct 24, 2025 08:03AM
This is the second near identical scene where Elizabeth refuses Darcy’s proposal made because of demands upon his honour. It’s been MONTHS, supposedly, in which Darcy has been procrastinating any decisive action because of dishonourable gossip (months & months at Netherfield), enough for Hurst to do a full makeover & turn into a fitness buff
Lit Reader
is 65% done
The editing is poor in the sense that there are time jumps, and scenes take place in a disorderly manner, which is challenging for readers to follow!
Lizzy and Darcy have several repetitive conversations, as if the scenea were written as alternatives and the author could not decide which one to pick so they added them all at random.
— Oct 23, 2025 05:36PM
Lizzy and Darcy have several repetitive conversations, as if the scenea were written as alternatives and the author could not decide which one to pick so they added them all at random.
Lit Reader
is 30% done
The storytelling is very detailed, meticulous, descriptions of dishes, smells, the texture of fabrics, all quite thorough. The scene building is immersive, and the overall feel is quite oppressive.
Dialogue is refined, with double meanings and a tab bit convoluted, adding to the oppressive feel — as if one was imprisoned at Netherfield alongside the party!
— Oct 23, 2025 08:59AM
Dialogue is refined, with double meanings and a tab bit convoluted, adding to the oppressive feel — as if one was imprisoned at Netherfield alongside the party!
