K.C. ·:¨༺ ♱✮♱ ༻¨:·’s Reviews > 키스 미 이프 유 캔 2 > Status Update
K.C. ·:¨༺ ♱✮♱ ༻¨:·
is 50% done
I think my biggest issue from this, isn’t even how irritating chase is. It’s how awkward the writing itself is. It jumps all over the place in a choppy way, hopping from scene to scene in a way that makes it feel like there’s no proper continuity in the story. Even the dialogue sometimes just jumps randomly and feels nonsensical. I’d enjoy myself more if the writing didn’t feel so amateurish.
— Oct 24, 2025 01:48PM
Like flag

