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Mo
is on page 156 of 352
I'm struggling to get through this book. I keep running into plotholes or errors that are so difficult to ignore. For example on pg 156, the author suddenly starts referring to Callum as Thomas. This goes on for two paragraphs before his name switches back. This wasn't self published, so I don't really understand how so many errors made it through editing. I'm going to try my best to finish, but we'll see.
— Oct 25, 2025 10:17AM
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Mo
is on page 98 of 352
So far, I’m enjoying this even though there have been inconsistencies such as Klara using a phone, stating she uses it instead of a laptop because of her dyslexia, only for the author to say “she closed her laptop”, a paragraph later. Or characters will be sitting and then they’re suddenly by a window or something. I’m still interested though and I really like the atmosphere of the Scottish inn in autumn.
— Aug 20, 2025 04:51PM
