Rina’s Reviews > Immortal Dark > Status Update

the writing isn't bad. it's okay. it definitely feels unpolished and something about it is odd and not really doing it for me. i love the concept of this and the lore is so fascinating. i know it's supposed to be enemies to lovers and i spoiled myself + it's obvious who it's between. while i love the dynamic of those personality archetypes, there's no personality in the WRITING to make it work.