Champ’s Reviews > Of Darkness and Light > Status Update

Just a crumb of character conflict that isn’t immediately resolved or straight textbook cheesy, I beg of you 😭

I love the world building and the characters and the magic. But damn, Ryan! Let the characters be wrong or stew a bit! Anytime they do something or feel bad, within a page an older or wiser character comes to tell them they’re exactly right and it’s all okay. Just wipes any conflict off the board constantly. I don’t want to be spoon fed how to feel about characters and their choices.