Leanne’s Reviews > Into the Drowning Deep > Status Update

Too many quick POV changes, jesus. It's hard to follow whose eyes we're looking through at any given moment.

Like Thunderhead, this book would benefit from a later monster reveal. The hook would be stronger if there was an air of mystery about what happened on the ship, instead of revealing it right from the start. It would increase the suspense, and would lend credence to the "quack scientists" feeling out of place if even the audience questioned their insistence that mermaids do in fact exist.