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Love the chemistry but I do think some of the plot is a bit off. Like the fact the dad switches is a bit unrealistic or the fact that Kyren only ever tosses the ball to Goodie on the field. I only know 2 other names on football team. While Nyla k succeeds in making the couple realistic and their chemistry work so well, I think the plot gets a bit tangled or needs a bit more complexity