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is 30% done
They're having their very first on-page dailogue at 30% ... ugh. Not the first conversation that happens between them, just the first one we actually get to see in real time. So far, I'm liking the idea of this story more than the execution. The author is passively telling me all about what happened--all exposition; no engaging investment in the characters. And becoming conversational in a new language after 2 weeks?
— Oct 30, 2025 02:42AM
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is 12% done
I saw another reviewer comment on one of this new-to-me author's books that there were endless paragraphs repeating the same information... over and over and OVER. And so far, it's true... and annoying... and yet I'm trying to stick it out because I really want to see what happens when the slave wakes up!!! 🤣
— Oct 30, 2025 01:54AM
