Mackenna’s Reviews > Why Trey Let Me Get Away > Status Update

using commas where they shouldn't be and not using commas where they should be 😔

its alr an uphill battle bcos hes blond; dont push ur luck w PEACH SHORTS

“'G..g..good.'"


dont even have the energy to be angry anymore. beaten into submission.

"'I don't like feeling like my money is being wasted on yachts, big houses, and fancy cars. I want it to mean more than that.'"

THEN BE A PHILANTROPIST; THERE IS A DIFFERENCE BTWN BEING GENEROUS TO PPL IN UR PERSONAL LIFE AND ACTUALLY DOING PHILANTHROPY

I think I am reverse classist and it is not working in treys favor

FACADE???? "FAÇADE" AND "FACADE" 6 PAGES APART???

interesting that she spelled façade as "façade" but naïve as "naive".... I feel like either go all in on the french spelling or dont. either "facade" + "naive" or "façade" + "naïve"

Ik I'm annoying and ragging on every aspect of this book but I cant w rich ppl, I rlly cant

"not in a creepy, he-shaves-his-legs kind of way."

I can't even begin to deal with this rn

"She’s not into florals or eccentric patterns. She likes to keep things subtle and simple." boooooooooorrrrrriiiinnnnnggggg