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So far this is definitely leaning more on romance than fantasy. I dunno, the MC basically only thinks of the guy she likes and not much else. And to be absolutely pedantic, there's some mentions of things that don't sound right in a medieval fantasy and there's one scene where they're sitting in mud, raining, but they see dust come up from the road. Girl, there's no dust in mud.
— Oct 25, 2025 12:27AM

