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“TAYA hesitated before bringing the weapon down.
‘Did you just swear?’ TAYA managed to pull the vale pen from her pocket and took a drag.
For the first time, TAYA saw what was unmistakably anger flash across Oscar’s face.”

Maddening! These sentences are back to back! Why did he use her name so many times?

In a cyberpunk mood so I’m trying to finish this. Man, I wish Daniel had realized he’s saying the character’s name way too much. It’s so distracting reading that Taya did this, and then Taya did that. Say “she” more!

Taya did this and Taya did that. It’s okay to say “she” every once in a while, especially if she’s the only one in the scene. 😋