Christy’s Reviews > A Berry Terrible Tour Group > Status Update
Christy
is on page 209 of 319
Suddenly her longstanding waitress is named Melody instead of Melanie. Just for chapter 17 though. She's Melanie throughout the rest of the book and the series so far. GET A GOOD PROOFREADER AND A BETTER EDITOR.
— Nov 01, 2025 05:09PM
Like flag
Christy’s Previous Updates
Christy
is on page 146 of 319
Why is the MC asking about a program that's been sold and they no longer have access to?
— Nov 01, 2025 03:23PM
Christy
is on page 101 of 319
On page 19 and 21 the vials were red and green. Now, on page 101, the vials were blue and green. GET A GOOD PROOFREADER.
— Nov 01, 2025 01:45PM
