Josh’s Reviews > Splinter Effect > Status Update

Okay it gets better. The scene writing could definitely use a lot of tightening up, but if you have a lot of concentration, you can get to it.

Also, there is a nice little twist here.At the ending, knit is pretty good.

Very interesting so far.I really love time travel books.So this one is up my alley. But there's a major drawback at first.I thought I just couldn't concentrate.So I thought it was on me, but I think i've pinpointed it down to author skill. He's got this sort of transient narrative approach which assumes the reader knows everything the author does about history.And ancient rome. It doesn't help the storytelling aspect