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3. Each chapter is from a different perspective. There seems to be a struggle between character development and having the appropriate setting/setup for specific philosophical musings. For example, in the first chapter Et Cetera is quite taken with the rich girl. In the second book, Et Cetera is suddenly all about one of the walk aways and seems to forget about rich girl
— Nov 06, 2025 10:13AM
Jack
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4. Really like the political and philosophy contained. Why do the walk aways still use so much technology? Romance surprisingly well done, but gets a bit tiring after some time
— Nov 05, 2025 05:27AM

