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wineomatic
is 22% done
It’s just a bunch of traveling through the woods that is very detached from the purpose of the mission, which is to find the supernatural killer. Also the captured nuns. I forgot why they were even traveling because it’s just an onward slog with internal monologue and conversation that does little to serve the plot.
— 6 hours, 57 min ago
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wineomatic
is 21% done
It’s hard to envision what is happening in this book. I don’t perceive a tactile sense of geography or stakes. There’s no sensory anchor: no map in the mind, no sense of changing terrain, no reason for each stop to exist beyond “travel to the next event.”
— Nov 03, 2025 05:42PM
