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Ch 11-12: The Quileute backstory is so intriguing! The spirit warriors, betrayals and the sacrificed of the third wife add rich layer to the story. I love learning about their history with the "Cold Ones" and the painful effect of vampire scent on wolves. Bella's fear of losing her humanity adds depght to her character, while Edward wants to keep her human until it's safe. Jasper scars reveal more of his tragic past.

Ch 9-10: These chapters bring suspense! A mysterious visitor in Bella's room sends chills, and the fact that Alice can't see them raises red flags. Victoria seems like the obvious suspect, but her scent is known, which complicate things. I love that Jacob and Edward are willing to work together for Bella's safety. The mention of Newborn vampires and Jasper's experience add some much needed depth to the lore.

Chapter 8 read! This chapter was a bit slower, but I appreciated the deeper dive into the imprinting and the tribe's surprise at how often it is happening. Jacob's frustration with Bella's "vampire in a few weeks" plan is relatable, he is clearly invested. Edward's trust in Bella is nice. but I am honestly a little over the Bella, Jacob, Edward love triangle. The focus on the lore was refreshing though.

Chapeter 5-7 read! These chapter were intense! The imprinting concept is wild! Romantic yet unsettling. Loved learning more about the wolves and Rosalie's tragic story. This gave her depth beyond the "ppretty vampire" label. Alice holding Bella hostage for a Porsche was hillarious yet toxic. The Edward-Jacob drama drags a bit. The tension is real, but it is starting to feel exhausting.

Chapter 3 and 4: Things are finally picking up! Edward's secret Florida trip motive comes out, Victoria is back in Forks hunting Bella. Emmet and Paul tension adds a bite to the story. Jacob's version of events gives fresh insight, and Bella is starting to questions Edward's honesty. Not bad, feels like the real plot is warming up.

Chapters 1 and 2 read! It starts slow with Bella grounded, but Alice's vision keeps things interesting, I need to know what she saw! Bella's still stubborn as ever, and Edward is hiding something. His random idea of a Florida trip seems suspicious. Why drag bella into the sunhine state when he literally sparkes in the sun? Something bigger is brewing here.