Paperback Prinsass’s Reviews > A Tongue so Sweet and Deadly > Status Update

The author is trying too hard to have Ellesia come off as the saint...rescuing orphaned children, trying to change the town to make it safer for the halfings, and fixing everyone's problems.... She's a total Mary Sue....the only bad thing she does is because of her king's oath. Kinda yuck. But the rest of the story is interesting....