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Shauna
is on page 110 of 358
Not bad but all the modern and earthly references used in this fantasy world is a little jarring. It doesn’t fit the narrative. Also, I can’t stand the names of the animals. Just standard earth-animal names with “in” tacked on at the end. Cougarin, ratin, etc… Not particularly original. 🫤
— Nov 05, 2025 02:39PM
Shauna
is on page 78 of 358
It’s … not bad. A little bland. The dialogue is a little too modern for the type of book it’s supposed to be. It mentions May Day but there shouldn’t BE a May Day as May doesn’t technically exist in this world.
— Nov 03, 2025 08:02PM

