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Abby is starting

As a former teen who read Red Queen (the series that got me back into reading), I fear this read has to be done...

Also, I really, really, reallllly dislike the first line of this book. Like it's a confusing, cheesy first line/paragraph and I believe "The smell of soot stings my nose..." would have been the better entrance. But c'est la vie.

— Nov 07, 2025 08:19AM

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Abby is 77% done

— Nov 28, 2025 08:02AM

Abby is 73% done

— Nov 27, 2025 03:01PM

Abby is 53% done

Will the copying ever end??? Every special moment from the Hunger Games just gets diluted straight into this.

— Nov 25, 2025 01:14PM

Abby is 42% done

— Nov 23, 2025 07:46AM

Abby is 33% done

— Nov 21, 2025 08:03AM

Abby is 10% done

The slums don't make sense if everyone is supposed to have powers in this world/city. The reason it works in Red Queen is because the powerful/people in charge kept their oppressed population near them in their city. It could work if it's assumed that this area is only mundane powers but the characters don't act like. If anything the slums should be where the powerless people are. Unless I'm missing something here?

— Nov 13, 2025 08:20AM

Abby is 6% done

— Nov 09, 2025 05:07PM