Darlene Barrett’s Reviews > Devil of the Forest > Status Update

Ground repeatedly referred to as "floor". Floor is a man made structure.

Confusing " bow " and "arrow". Writing as well as storytelling deteriorating more.

Spelling and or wrong words again.

Another "down in Seattle" from Oregon. Would discard this book, but curious to see how much worse it gets.

Lots of trouble turning pages without going blank or skipping several.

Hit the "breaks" (truck). Bad, bad.

Am finding protagonist unlikable.

Driving exact wrong direction to Seattle, south from Oregon. This kind of careless writing would have me toss the book usually. Gotta see how much worse it gets.

Behavior overdone.

Asides to reader spoil story.