Shauna’s Reviews > The Broken Elf King > Status Update
Shauna
is on page 108 of 354
These books are supposed to be standalones, but that’s not right. There is a main plot that ties them together—the elf king’s desire for revenge on the Nightfall Queen. You can read just one or two books, but if you read them out of order, the revenge plot might not make sense. Also, it will leave you with questions as there are loose ends. A standalone should tie all loose ends up by the end of the story.
— Nov 09, 2025 10:31AM
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Shauna
is on page 304 of 354
Emotional manipulation never ends well. Threatening to take a lover if he didn’t give her what she wanted. Cliche. Ended how I expected it to, with a go ahead.
— Nov 12, 2025 02:52AM
Shauna
is on page 186 of 354
The plot is good. The writing is so bland and dry. It doesn’t evoke emotion or makes me feel for any of the characters. Might as well be reading a phone book.
— Nov 09, 2025 05:04PM
Shauna
is on page 95 of 354
Ok. Author has a tendency to plug other authors in her books. This one mentions J. Hall, which I can only assume is Julie Hall, another indie author. In The Last Dragon King, she plugs a different author. Not sure how I feel about that. I suppose it’s better than her plugging her OWN books in the story, which I’ve heard some indie authors will do.
Seems a bit silly, not gonna lie.
— Nov 09, 2025 09:15AM
Seems a bit silly, not gonna lie.
Shauna
is on page 54 of 354
The editing isn’t quite as good in this one. There seemed to be most of a sentence missing on one page, and a character was introduced with her name spelled two different ways.
Again, not a bad read so far, but a little bland and uninspired. Not much detail to grip the reader and draw them into the world. And still with the use of the modern vernacular!
— Nov 09, 2025 08:39AM
Again, not a bad read so far, but a little bland and uninspired. Not much detail to grip the reader and draw them into the world. And still with the use of the modern vernacular!
