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I also think talking about some of the moments as museum before they happened undercut the bigger reveals (why Mena left, some of Fawkes backstory).
— Nov 09, 2025 04:47PM
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Emma
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I liked the pieces of this but I think the writing style was trying to capture that omniscient fairytale style narration in some ways but the perspective was too close for it and it only served to create a barrier between the reader and the characters. Gentle and weird. Give this to fans of Skipshock, Marcus Sedgwick and Parker Peeveyhouse.
— Nov 09, 2025 04:46PM
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Callisto had grown up outside of time, Fawkes had grown up *all over* time.
— Nov 09, 2025 04:00PM
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Beneath it he [Fawkes] wore his own flimsy boxers and a ragged chest binding.
— Nov 09, 2025 03:56PM
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Hmmm. I like the bones of this but I see what reviews mean about it getting really convoluted really quickly. Shifting from cool time travel to timey wimey over here.
— Nov 09, 2025 03:47PM
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I want to know that when your moment comes, you won’t hide from it.
— Nov 09, 2025 03:19PM

