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“I lifted the dull knife from my plate and met his gaze as I slapped the flat of the knife against my palm. He flinched, and I hid a laugh against my wrist.” Girl you are too grown for this shit
— 14 hours, 46 min ago
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AV
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MC A HUNDRED PERCENT believes Niyar and Palia assassinated her dad, but couldn’t imagine them being corrupt. The mental gymnastics is crazy
— 6 hours, 29 min ago
AV
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“The magic in his blood had eaten at his humanity” Since when were the Awaleen human
— 6 hours, 36 min ago
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Someone needs to stitch her mouth shut or cut her tongue out. I’m so serious.
— 19 hours, 58 min ago
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“Whatever caused his outburst—“ It was not an outburst. Wtf. Did anyone bother opening a dictionary or googling synonyms for this goddamned book
— 21 hours, 37 min ago
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Why is he mansplaining her own people’s magic to her. Boy gtfo (Also this is an awful way to world build. Why can’t MC just think this to the reader instead.)
— 23 hours, 15 min ago
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“His expression smoothed into the mask I had learned to approach with extreme caution” Is bantering and yapping with your jailer and prince genocider extreme caution or
— Nov 09, 2025 12:50PM
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“Corrupt walls of Usr Jasad? What was she talking about?” Girl you literally admitted that your grandparents assassinated your dad (a foreign prince heir no less) and imprisoned your mother. What are YOU talking about?????
— Nov 09, 2025 11:30AM
