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mkhare
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Ehhhh, this writing style and character voice isn’t really working for me. Is the fact that people are afraid to be out trading and travelling after a manticore kills a bunch of people in a town a ‘strange thing’? Especially when the character/author is comparing this reaction to death to women dying in childbirth, or men dying on battlefields? Huh?
— Nov 10, 2025 06:29PM
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mkhare
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Why make a point of saying ‘It was good for these nobles from the city to see the monster’s body. It showed them manticores weren’t supernatural. They weren’t invincible. They were monstrous animals, but they were still animals’
Only to say ‘Ahead of me stretched a shining road stacked with the pelts of demons’ on the next page?
— Nov 10, 2025 06:52PM
Only to say ‘Ahead of me stretched a shining road stacked with the pelts of demons’ on the next page?
