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"...But I am rather observant. Even if it is crass to admit one’s strengths."
She's saying this to a man who's been openly reading her mind btw. please me SO fr.
— Nov 13, 2025 01:14AM
She's saying this to a man who's been openly reading her mind btw. please me SO fr.
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Nov 12, 2025 11:00AM
oh my instinct!! i felt something off with the first page and thought i'll come back to this
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Your instincts are very good. It's a little clumsy, and the dialogue is ... Not great.
Gabrielle wrote: "Your instincts are very good. It's a little clumsy, and the dialogue is ... Not great."oh dear... bad news indeed......
