Saille’s Reviews > Brain Storm > Status Update

, I like it OK but I’m not overwhelmed. There is insufficient world building to determine whether the main plot can sustain itself. Also insufficient background on supporting characters to determine whether or not you like them.

Eeh. I like it so far, but I’m not enthralled. Key plot elements are not well-defined enough to say there is sufficient world-building - at least not as yet. No information given about the government agency and what it would want of people with talent or why they would protect them. Insufficient character background on supporting characters to tell if you like them or not.