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im gunna go back and update my thoughts on the pages ive read at a future date but for now im on 486

she's lying about the burning and the morphine to protect edward but she's not that worried about lying to carlisle since he probably wont have to creae another vampire ... anyway i hope she does tell him the morphine made it worse someday

the way she hadnt realised she was thirsty but a part of her brain was storing that information in tabs like she used to do for breathing and blinking, interesting

bella crushed edward ahh the hug was too tight for him due to her newborn strength !!

bella remembers edward telling her vampires could get easily distracted & she agrees

& then she speaks in her high pitched bell voice as if she sang . i wanna know what she sounds like but of course she says i love you to edward first <3

her brain is so different now she considered for a 64th of a second before awnsering carlisle

okay bella had never seen edward's beautiful face before . real

she wanted to be standing straight so she was there was no in between of doing the action . interesting

everything is fine edward says + bella is like really?really? do you mean 'everything' but yes actually he does + yes it is disorientating as he said

bella's human memories are clouded by a thick dark veil even tho they werent that long ago :o

the burning has changed but bad news now there's one in her throat - the eternal thirst of vampires ... but good news the burning is fading from her fingertips and toes

and then the pain gets worse and worse and her heart is beating faster and its agonising but carlisle said she'll be perfect earlier on and he was right and then she opens her eyes woohoo and everything is so clear she's finally a vampire !yay!

which side will bella take. edward thinks she'll surprise him as she always does what are they talking about is it the imprinting ??

alice saying bella is going to be dazzling +edward growls she's always been that way but alice is like but look . and bella is like okay good cause i thought i was just charred briquette by now . funny.

alice tells edward in her mind when bella will awaken and bella wants to know haha

okay bella's brain is already a vampire's brain able to think of more things now she's holding on to the stake for support as she is burning and she can hear edward ... but if she speaks she wont be able to stop screaming and carlisle is like maybe its the morphine working woohoo but its not after edward says she must be in agony . imagine if he could read her thoughts he'd suffer as much as she is ...

bella's perspective as jake+edward savE her and edward is getting renesmee out and she cant feel anything and everything feels wrong and she's drifting into darkness and blackness but she fights against it - well she endures so that she can live for renesmee and she remembers the feel of her little body is so interesting

and then the endless rage burns on but she cant/wont scream but she can feel her lower body

bella's heart is changing woohoo its beating strongly again ... which distracted jake from the fact now gravity doesnt hold him to earth but renesmee does +he thought he felt a pull to kill her since he was no longer drawn to bella but eeek it was not that at all ... oh boy

bella is in pain and it's RED like blood

renesmee was hot skin just like jacob .. and they share the same amount of chromosomes . interesting .

oh no bella's spine broke

something warm touched jake even though nothing felt warm to him - it's renesemeeeeeee woo

okayy the steel venom syringe fun times for you eddy

okay interesting edward is sealing his venom inside bella's body by covering the bite hes originally made to save and turn her

jake thinks edward is in denial but little does he know bella will live of course she will