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Karin if you say "swishy" one more goddamn time

Oh my gd we're rehashing everything AGAIN

If you're this stressed about a single craving for an ice cream cone you have an eating disorder btw

Sorry it seemed like Becky had some kind of horrible news but instead we've been derailed into talking about how Elizabeth got the new job AGAIN.

This book could be 500 pages shorter if Karin stopped rehashing shit we already know

The mother is now rehashing everything we already know to the protagonist and her sister

It's like a 5 page conversation

Constantly describing exactly what your character is wearing is indicative of bad writing btw

After 867 pages I am extremely fucking done with the protagonist's self deprecation

Do people actually fill out comment cards? Because Karin seems to be under the impression everyone does but I literally never have unless I had an awful experience

The fact that the trans girl protagonists are always like subjects of Scientific Study is definitely a kink thing bc it doesn't make any sense