Lisa’s Reviews > When Silence Screamed: The Girl Who Knew Too Much > Status Update
Lisa
is 20% done
This really needs an editor or ChatGPT because there are a lot of typos. Some parts of the storyline are all over the place, too. I also don’t really like her “Reflections” at the end of each chapter—they repeat sentences from the chapters and sound almost the same. I think those sections should’ve been cut out and incorporated into the chapters instead.
— Nov 14, 2025 10:49AM
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Lisa
is 25% done
The chapter with Luke I find strange, “that is a story for another time” I think this book should’ve been her opportunity to give details and a lot is missing. There’s a good story but she’s only giving like 75% of it and it just feels like a waste
— Nov 14, 2025 10:50AM
