Maria Lebron’s Reviews > The Courting of Bristol Keats > Status Update
Maria Lebron
is on page 254 of 547
So frustrating to have made it this far and still not feel connected to the story or the characters. I have so much faith in Mary’s writing, but this has been skipping around and glossing over what could be so good. The bones are there. So much telling going on I hardly know what makes these characters tick, and I certainly don’t feel any of it. The writing is pretty tho.
— Nov 15, 2025 04:06PM
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Maria Lebron
is on page 360 of 547
Ok, but more than any other complaint I have…what person in their right mind would actually consider remaining host to a magic-eating tick?! Sure, your life will change if it gets removed…but how are you not repulsed at the idea of being a host to a parasite for the rest of your life?? GET IT OUT OF MEEEEEE
— Nov 16, 2025 04:31PM
Maria Lebron
is on page 359 of 547
Simultaneously gets better and remains frustratingly slow, and the writing makes me feel like I’m being held at arm’s length, like I can’t really sink into the story and experience it as it’s happening. So disappointed and yet hopeful.
— Nov 16, 2025 04:18PM
