fuzzybears’s Reviews > The Mercenary and the Mortician > Status Update
fuzzybears
is 98% done
The characters were well developed with their own quirks and personality. You could easily understand their reasoning behind their actions. However, the plot was a bit lackluster with not the best execution. The premise was interesting and the dynamic b/w the MCs was also good. The idea of the book was good but the execution of it was so so.
— Nov 16, 2025 05:01AM
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fuzzybears
is 99% done
I can see what the author wanted to do with this series but didn’t get to accomplish. The couple fell for each other too quickly. The climax was lackluster and didn’t make sense considering it’s a highly secured mercenary base with cameras, guards, etc. The ghost aspect was something I wanted to see more of and it was a bit wasted. The character dialogue holding the book together.
— Nov 16, 2025 05:04AM
