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Sergio
Sergio is 94% done
I never thought Annalise was lying to Clara. So Fernanda didn't do it? I guess I'm about to finding it out.

The writing is beautiful, all the parallelism used are kinda pleasant from a reader point of view.
Nov 16, 2025 05:41AM
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Sergio
Sergio is 85% done
It's nice the Clara pointed out the essay didn't look like one written by a 15 year old girl.

So Annalise snitched on Fernanda and this is causing the whole kidnapping?
Nov 15, 2025 02:36PM
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Sergio
Sergio is 65% done
Both sides have this parallelism about cannibalizing their mothers. The parts with Clara intern monologuing were good, you can see how mentally ill she is and Fernanda's monologues were funny but I think this is been dragging for a while and I'm getting bored. I think I'm not that interested in the creepy pasta side of the story.
Nov 15, 2025 04:55AM
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Sergio
Sergio is 20% done
The writing style is kinda beautiful and also funny but only when we are with Fernanda. The obvious reason for this was revenge but so far it hasn't been revealed the girls did something to Miss Clara.

Also Miss Clara hunting rabbits? That's something you wouldn't expect from a literature teacher.
Nov 08, 2025 05:47AM
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Sergio
Sergio is 14% done
The way she is counting the days, hours and minutes after the event shows how it marked her.

Also the mother was awful.
Nov 07, 2025 05:16PM
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