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“You pinky promised to save me” OMG!!!!!!😂

The MFC is still annoying me. She finally loses it over a smashed mug. I still can’t get over the lack of modern amenities but they have a state of the art espresso machine and she is a practiced barista. The flow is weird too. Jumps ahead kind of suddenly

I sped up the narration to 150% it seems like the author through all the popular dragon tropes into a blender and wrote this story. The world building is shallow. We are told things, but I’m not getting drawn into the story so I can feel these things

Holding my interest enough not to Dnf it. Some things seem too modern— caramel macchiato. There’s a love,triangle right now. The romance is kind of lack luster. I don’t really care which way it goes

Libby audio
Duet narration which is done well

I’m not crazy about the MFC. IMO she’s annoying. She does things that would be an issue if anyone else did them. Ie—she got annoyed when someone didn’t say “thank you” at her job, but she didn’t want to say “please” when it really called for it