alyssa’s Reviews > Alchemised > Status Update

This book desperately needed an editor. I don’t see how this story needs 1000 pages to be told. And the only reason a 1000-page debut is allowed is because the marketing for this book capitalizes off of the author’s Harry Potter fanfic fame. The writing isn’t bad, but the info-dumping of worldbuilding leaves much to be desired. Try as I might, I see HP everywhere here. In rare moments, it stands on its own.