IRIFF’s Reviews > For Whom the Belle Tolls > Status Update
IRIFF
is 37% done
This book started of so strong. The help desk in hell, where she can let off some of that customer service steam, is a great concept. Turning it into a love story with demons is fun, if a little obvious. The Sharkie arc has potential. The incessant "Princess" and "Big Guy" is obnoxious and cringey. I can see how this works as a web comic, but I'm getting bored.
— Nov 17, 2025 08:47AM
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IRIFF
is 40% done
Examples of why I'm bored: in chapter 27, we could not get through a conversation without reviewing every inside thought Lily had in between every line of dialogue. In chapter 28, every breath, movement, pause, and inside thought during the scene with Greg was listed in detail, drawing the moment out. This didn't make the moment more poignant or impactful; just long. And I still have over 14 hours left of this.
— Nov 17, 2025 12:47PM
