Erin’s Reviews > The Everlasting > Status Update

Owen: "She looks like she could kill me. It's so hot."
Una: "He looks so easy to kill. It's so hot."

I am chewing the drywall and clawing at the walls of my enclosure. My heart is being stabbed repeatedly, and I'm thanking Alix E. Harrow for it.

If I suddenly found myself being cared for by a beautiful, massive lady knight, I too would ask no questions and accept this as my new reality.

Listen, the writing is truly beautiful, just stunning, but what I have learned in my recent personal reading renaissance is that I truly hate the overuse of short (1-2 sentence) paragraphs. A little here or there for style is great! Having that just be what the book is? Not so much. If beating short paragraphs to death is a crime, this book is serving forever.