Anna Makowska’s Reviews > The Huntsman's Heart: a dark romantasy Snow White retelling > Status Update

Falling into a coma might be a part of og Snow White, but my, isn't it boring plot-wise. Ngl at this part the main conflict seems resolved and we're just dragging deflated tension balloon behind us. I'm tempted to skim the last 30 pages just to finish this... Also why is a 300-page book 7.99$, what a ripoff.

But also, it feels the are more typos in this one than a usual fare even though it was in editing until nearly release day...

I think I know who's in this crypt...

Good these characters aren't human, because otherwise the crimes against hygiene would ruin the group scenes for me.

I love how Alaric's self-loathing plays into the dynamic. But the dialogues between the 3 gargoyles when they're alone are soooo wooden, idk why. Also Raban is the "cinnamon roll" guy but the other 2 don't feel distinct from one another...

At least the matter of the horse was addressed, I was worried we forgot about it...

This is getting kinky with voyeurism and punishment and asking for permission...

Why name one of the side characters Kael, now I'm gonna forever wondered if that part was ai-generated.