Kelspar’s Reviews > Hand-Fasting and Other Hazards: A Forced Proximity Cozy Paranormal Romance > Status Update
Kelspar
is 21% done
The FMC is so immature it's painful. Nia acts like a moody 13 year old, not 25? One of those characters who's supposed to act "tough" It's so awkward. It feels like a kid trying to write an adult character but not really understanding how people act irl and this is the result.
I don't mind tough characters at all, I like when a FMC can kick ass and control everything. But this is not it. Maybe it'll get better?
— Nov 20, 2025 10:12AM
I don't mind tough characters at all, I like when a FMC can kick ass and control everything. But this is not it. Maybe it'll get better?
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