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ElleLawliet
is 50% done
By 50% nothing much has happened, they meet, and they talk. Some subplot about social services but not enough to keep the reader interested. There’s no chase, no angst, both characters are into each other from page 1. So far it’s a 4/10. I’m missing action, plot, heat, all i’m getting is small talk and kids.
— Nov 22, 2025 06:40AM
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