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Nope. Nope nope nope. The writing style is absolutely grating and simply *telling* me too much ://
Maybe I’ll get back to it in a couple months, years, for another try. But as much as I’m vaguely interested in the story, that’s all squandered rn by the writing being both too plain and too opaque :((((
— Nov 23, 2025 02:08AM
Maybe I’ll get back to it in a couple months, years, for another try. But as much as I’m vaguely interested in the story, that’s all squandered rn by the writing being both too plain and too opaque :((((
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