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Rina
is on page 43 of 316
okay like. ???? why the pov from niamh here? and why write that in 3rd person if the main pov is in 1st like why not write the entire book in 3rd???????
— Nov 23, 2025 12:46PM
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Rina
is on page 222 of 316
i’m liking this. it’s cute. it’s funny. however. while there is a plot, it feels like it’s being thrown aside for over-written and way-too-long scenes about tasting wine. and i get it, jess is getting to know austin but do these specific scenes need to be THAT long. i want more lore and drama bc the worldbuilding is interesting
— Nov 25, 2025 01:32AM
