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Neptune
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I don’t love the time jump we did, I would have loved to see Nahri and Dara bonding a bit more, I feel like we’ve missed a key part in their relationship build up, like suddenly she knows him better then we (the reader) does because she’s spent a week with him and we haven’t.
— Nov 25, 2025 02:30PM
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Neptune
is on page 144 of 544
Lowkey, Dara is a cry baby. Like sorry your family died but that doesn’t mean you get to be racist now??? “You didn’t grow up In my world, you don’t understand” is such a move horrible people pull when they know they are wrong. And him leaving her in the desert after saying all that horrible stuff to and about her?? I don’t feel bad for him.
— Nov 26, 2025 08:38PM
Neptune
is on page 134 of 544
Ugh. I hate that we skipped time again, I feel like I know nothing of Nahri and Dara’s relationship, it’s been growing off page. And I wanted to see her steal the horses and see them work together maybe. It feels like we are learning all about the world from Ali’s perspective and his chapters seem longer.
— Nov 26, 2025 08:12PM
