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is 50% done
I’m having a hard time getting through this one. a few writing quirks that are bugging me:
1. I encourage a well-placed curse word, but the way the word “fuck” is liberally sprinkled across the dialogue shows a lack of creativity.
2. Fisher is a chatty Kathy during the intimate scenes. When it comes to declarations of undying love, actions mean more than words, and less is more.
— Nov 30, 2025 04:18AM
1. I encourage a well-placed curse word, but the way the word “fuck” is liberally sprinkled across the dialogue shows a lack of creativity.
2. Fisher is a chatty Kathy during the intimate scenes. When it comes to declarations of undying love, actions mean more than words, and less is more.
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