telemakhos’s Reviews > The Bone Harp > Status Update

telemakhos
telemakhos is 13% done
Chapters 1-3: nearly DNF'd. Goddard's writing is incredibly repetitive. More so, I think, as a way of conveying Tamsin's discombobulation. But it doesn't work. It takes Tamsin 2 whole chapters to wake up.

Chapters 4-5: still repetitive, but actual action & dialogue are happening. Will continue.
Nov 30, 2025 01:24PM
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telemakhos is 35% done
End of Part 1: I am glad I persevered bc holy shit holy shit holy shit
Nov 30, 2025 04:24PM
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