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is 35% done
A third of the way in, and I’m kind of bored. I understand where the characters are, but have no good idea why they stay. The flashbacks don’t move quick enough, and there’s all this emotion I can objectively appreciate, but I’m not connected to it. At this point, I’m more frustrated with the narrator than sympathetic.
— Nov 26, 2025 02:46AM

