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Mel (Epic Reading)
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Story #4 - Thagomizer
Love it! Not sure how it fits with the theme but I don’t even care as what an awful, but perhaps real scenario?
Reminded me of ‘are you my mummy’ from Doctor Who with the repeated line of the child…
Story #5 - Without a Face
Umm… ok? Needs more context added to define the point.
— Dec 03, 2025 03:27AM
Love it! Not sure how it fits with the theme but I don’t even care as what an awful, but perhaps real scenario?
Reminded me of ‘are you my mummy’ from Doctor Who with the repeated line of the child…
Story #5 - Without a Face
Umm… ok? Needs more context added to define the point.
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Mel (Epic Reading)
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Story #11 - We who own the median
Wonderful!! A great commentary and perfect ‘curse’ set-up. I love the karma that comes into play. While the setting is sad you can’t help but kind of cheer for the tragedy in the end because it feels deserved.
— Jan 01, 2026 01:33AM
Wonderful!! A great commentary and perfect ‘curse’ set-up. I love the karma that comes into play. While the setting is sad you can’t help but kind of cheer for the tragedy in the end because it feels deserved.
Mel (Epic Reading)
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Story #10 - The Turning
Ohhh… this is like extreme puberty. I love the analogy (and argument) that shows the evil of parents who do not accept their children as they are. The ones who disown their kids because they are queer, trans, gender fluid, etc.
I still can’t talk to my Dad about being bisexual… I’m 43. He’s the only one I intentionally hide behind my husband with. Sad but true.
— Dec 31, 2025 03:21AM
Ohhh… this is like extreme puberty. I love the analogy (and argument) that shows the evil of parents who do not accept their children as they are. The ones who disown their kids because they are queer, trans, gender fluid, etc.
I still can’t talk to my Dad about being bisexual… I’m 43. He’s the only one I intentionally hide behind my husband with. Sad but true.
Mel (Epic Reading)
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Story #9 - Autonomy
Brilliant!! I don’t want to say much… but blind MC that is smarter because of her lack of sight.
— Dec 30, 2025 03:21PM
Brilliant!! I don’t want to say much… but blind MC that is smarter because of her lack of sight.
Mel (Epic Reading)
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Story #8 - Magical Girls Child Crusader Squad
This would make an amazing comic book series!!! I love the subtle nods to Buffy the Vampire Slayer (or at least that’s what I got the sense of but it might be because I’m old, lol). And finally the idea that a transwoman could be themselves because of a magical power that shifts them seems like a dream many would willingly accept, even if it meant fighting monsters.
— Dec 21, 2025 12:38AM
This would make an amazing comic book series!!! I love the subtle nods to Buffy the Vampire Slayer (or at least that’s what I got the sense of but it might be because I’m old, lol). And finally the idea that a transwoman could be themselves because of a magical power that shifts them seems like a dream many would willingly accept, even if it meant fighting monsters.
Mel (Epic Reading)
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Story #7 - Hopscotch for Keeps
Ohh very good summer time kids story. I like how the hopscotch kid could represent any number of things.
— Dec 18, 2025 04:02AM
Ohh very good summer time kids story. I like how the hopscotch kid could represent any number of things.
Mel (Epic Reading)
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Book #6 - Last Leaf of an Ursine Tree
Interesting statement on mother/daughter dynamic and menstruation being the moment of ‘power’ for women.
— Dec 18, 2025 03:51AM
Interesting statement on mother/daughter dynamic and menstruation being the moment of ‘power’ for women.
Mel (Epic Reading)
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Story #3 - The Long Flesh of the Law
Ohh icky. But good metaphor for fear of police.
— Dec 03, 2025 02:53AM
Ohh icky. But good metaphor for fear of police.
Mel (Epic Reading)
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Story #1 - Why We Keep Exploding
What a unique take on how puberty makes teens crazy and unpredictable. Love the trans twist here on gender. A solid start.
Story #2 - Unkindly Girls
I know what Piper is going for here; but it’s a little too vague and hidden. I’m all for not ‘telling’ too much and implying; but at some point I need more context and less ambiguity.
— Nov 20, 2025 12:57AM
What a unique take on how puberty makes teens crazy and unpredictable. Love the trans twist here on gender. A solid start.
Story #2 - Unkindly Girls
I know what Piper is going for here; but it’s a little too vague and hidden. I’m all for not ‘telling’ too much and implying; but at some point I need more context and less ambiguity.
