Amber’s Reviews > The Ballad of Never After > Status Update
Amber
is 80% done
If Apollo could have been so quickly detained why wasn’t he found and put under lock and key faster for Evangeline’s safety earlier in the story?
Also these stones are total cop-outs for what should be better story telling. Evangeline cheating on Apollo because of the effects of a stone reeks of “I did it because the alcohol made me do it.”
Where is the reason for all the hype and dazzle?
— Dec 03, 2025 03:49PM
Also these stones are total cop-outs for what should be better story telling. Evangeline cheating on Apollo because of the effects of a stone reeks of “I did it because the alcohol made me do it.”
Where is the reason for all the hype and dazzle?
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Amber
is 68% done
“But Jacks’s fingers were faster. They plunged down her shirt and made her gasp as he pulled out the glowing gold rock.” P. 281
W.T.F.
— Dec 03, 2025 09:34AM
W.T.F.
Amber
is 65% done
*sighs in exasperation* YA and its obsession with love triangles.
— Dec 03, 2025 07:20AM
Amber
is 57% done
The execution of the worldbuilding and writing for this story is so wonky. I keep thinking Candyland with vampires and the romance isn’t appealing to me. I’m still sure LaLa is malicious (don’t trust men or women with a string of romantic tragedy following behind them) and Evangeline has two brain cells fighting for second place.
— Nov 24, 2025 11:42AM
Amber
is 35% done
Carving words into your skin is a little much. I’ve clearly underestimated Evangeline’s pain tolerance. 😑
— Nov 23, 2025 06:38PM
