Kynthos-the-Archer (Kyn)’s Reviews > Undesirable > Status Update

Jeffrey calls George's big adventure as a fun treasure hunt for the vampires. Lol

Gosh! How I adore Jeffrey. He has brought much humor into the story. I really really hope George would end up with him.

Then again actually Gregory wasn't that bad either, neither is that old mysterious hermit vamp.

I am faster that George figuring out who that guy is the moment he approaches George for sex and blood.

Do you know how good it is to be the predator and to finally have the prey, so warm and soft and helpless beneath you?

"Now consider this again, I will have you. I must have you. Now. This instant. But shall you fight it and make it rape? Or shall we pretend to be lovers?

That unlocked phone was a big no no for someone who have years of experience in avoiding the authorities and being in stealth mode daily. So this is hard for me to accept as an acceptable slip up. More like a weakness in the plotline. And that man is still stumbling over simple things right now.

My body was tired from sitting for so long. I squirmed as the strap of the seatbelt kept creeping up over my neck. - I feel you George. I am only 5'3". By the way, George is only 5'4" and weights around 128lbs or so. I am around 112lbs. Very petite. Not easy to find clothes that fits me just right. Sighhh...

Only perks would be that boys likes petite woman like me. They felt all macho around me I guess.

Come on Jeffery! Get your puppy out now! And get it done right this time. I wanna see the both of you together. **wicked thoughts**

After being treated like the most delicious donut in the box for over a week, it actually stung to realize that I wasn't as devastatingly attractive to humans as I was to vampires. What the hell. - Lol

Jeffrey is such a devious soul. I much adore him.Gregory is sexy and could be great for George but picking Jeffrey will be so much more fun... for the readers, that is. >;D

The author is pretty good at creating atmosphere and invoking emotions from readers.