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Leanne Crabtree
Leanne Crabtree is 60% done
Intriguing but I'm very into the idea of him and Jeffrey being together. Stuff everyone else
Mar 02, 2017 07:57AM Add a comment
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Kynthos-the-Archer (Kyn)
Kynthos-the-Archer (Kyn) is 90% done
Jeffrey calls George's big adventure as a fun treasure hunt for the vampires. Lol

Gosh! How I adore Jeffrey. He has brought much humor into the story. I really really hope George would end up with him.

Then again actually Gregory wasn't that bad either, neither is that old mysterious hermit vamp.
Jan 06, 2017 04:22AM Add a comment
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Kynthos-the-Archer (Kyn)
Kynthos-the-Archer (Kyn) is 80% done
I am faster that George figuring out who that guy is the moment he approaches George for sex and blood.
Jan 06, 2017 12:46AM Add a comment
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Kynthos-the-Archer (Kyn)
Kynthos-the-Archer (Kyn) is 77% done
Do you know how good it is to be the predator and to finally have the prey, so warm and soft and helpless beneath you?
Jan 05, 2017 08:43PM Add a comment
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Kynthos-the-Archer (Kyn)
Kynthos-the-Archer (Kyn) is 77% done
"Now consider this again, I will have you. I must have you. Now. This instant. But shall you fight it and make it rape? Or shall we pretend to be lovers?
Jan 05, 2017 08:38PM Add a comment
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Kynthos-the-Archer (Kyn)
Kynthos-the-Archer (Kyn) is 75% done
That unlocked phone was a big no no for someone who have years of experience in avoiding the authorities and being in stealth mode daily. So this is hard for me to accept as an acceptable slip up. More like a weakness in the plotline. And that man is still stumbling over simple things right now.
Jan 05, 2017 07:08PM Add a comment
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Kynthos-the-Archer (Kyn)
Kynthos-the-Archer (Kyn) is 66% done
My body was tired from sitting for so long. I squirmed as the strap of the seatbelt kept creeping up over my neck. - I feel you George. I am only 5'3". By the way, George is only 5'4" and weights around 128lbs or so. I am around 112lbs. Very petite. Not easy to find clothes that fits me just right. Sighhh...

Only perks would be that boys likes petite woman like me. They felt all macho around me I guess.
Jan 05, 2017 07:04AM Add a comment
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Kynthos-the-Archer (Kyn)
Kynthos-the-Archer (Kyn) is 62% done
Come on Jeffery! Get your puppy out now! And get it done right this time. I wanna see the both of you together. **wicked thoughts**
Jan 05, 2017 05:09AM Add a comment
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Kynthos-the-Archer (Kyn)
Kynthos-the-Archer (Kyn) is 54% done
After being treated like the most delicious donut in the box for over a week, it actually stung to realize that I wasn't as devastatingly attractive to humans as I was to vampires. What the hell. - Lol
Jan 05, 2017 02:48AM Add a comment
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Kynthos-the-Archer (Kyn)
Kynthos-the-Archer (Kyn) is 48% done
Jeffrey is such a devious soul. I much adore him.Gregory is sexy and could be great for George but picking Jeffrey will be so much more fun... for the readers, that is. >;D
Jan 04, 2017 09:53PM Add a comment
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Kynthos-the-Archer (Kyn)
Kynthos-the-Archer (Kyn) is 43% done
The author is pretty good at creating atmosphere and invoking emotions from readers.
Jan 04, 2017 05:07PM Add a comment
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Kynthos-the-Archer (Kyn)
Kynthos-the-Archer (Kyn) is 36% done
Sorry for the oh-too-frequent updates. But I couldn't help not posting this...

"If you were mine now, I would taste each part of you. I would pierce each of your thighs, your wrists, your throat, I'd find new and interesting places to drink you. But [….]"

I find this dialogue very arousing. Erotic.
Jan 04, 2017 08:08AM Add a comment
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Kynthos-the-Archer (Kyn)
Kynthos-the-Archer (Kyn) is 36% done
Wow! I am blown away. By that scene with Gregory showing George a glimpse of his desire for him.

Dear Author,

Thanking for that slice of amazing erotic foreplay. Made me feel the sex, the desires and burning passion. I like it more that way. That mind trick Gregory did was pretty original. I want more.

Sincerely,
Kyn
Jan 04, 2017 07:59AM Add a comment
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Kynthos-the-Archer (Kyn)
Kynthos-the-Archer (Kyn) is 35% done
And here's the weird thing, and I'm not entirely sure I can describe it properly, but as crazy as it seems, those cuffs actually made me feel a bit better. I know. It wasn't just counterintuitive, it was downright crazy. They terrified me, because the level of my vulnerability notched up several thousand percent. But at the same time it was oddly, perplexingly reassuring. The moment I had them on, it was....
Jan 04, 2017 07:37AM Add a comment
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Kynthos-the-Archer (Kyn)
Kynthos-the-Archer (Kyn) is 30% done
I am seriously suspecting Jeffrey's humanity and sense of morality has been misread by George. He doesn't seem all that bad especially what he did right now for another human.
Jan 04, 2017 05:35AM Add a comment
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Kynthos-the-Archer (Kyn)
Kynthos-the-Archer (Kyn) is 25% done
The auction means all those Vamps gets to chomp on him to taste the product before the purchase. How deviously wonderful! The poor guy.
Jan 03, 2017 09:32PM Add a comment
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Kynthos-the-Archer (Kyn)
Kynthos-the-Archer (Kyn) is 25% done
The auction means all those Vamps gets to chop on him to taste the product before the purchase.How deviously wonderful! The poor guy.
Jan 03, 2017 09:29PM Add a comment
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Kynthos-the-Archer (Kyn)
Kynthos-the-Archer (Kyn) is 21% done
It's like fattening up a chicken before the slaughter. And they aren't ashamed to admit it to said poor chicken.
Jan 03, 2017 06:58PM Add a comment
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Kynthos-the-Archer (Kyn)
Kynthos-the-Archer (Kyn) is 17% done
Gosh, this book is the drug. I couldn't put it down at all. it's now 1AM and tomorrow I have work. Sucks man!
Jan 03, 2017 09:05AM Add a comment
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Kynthos-the-Archer (Kyn)
Kynthos-the-Archer (Kyn) is 15% done
How physically helpless I felt when he tore out my wrist on the sofa. The way he'd slid into my mind and manipulated me into doing everything, feeling everything he wanted, regardless of my feelings on the matter. And now I felt caught in his attention like a fly in a web.
Jan 03, 2017 08:27AM Add a comment
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Kynthos-the-Archer (Kyn)
Kynthos-the-Archer (Kyn) is 12% done
I am very absorbed right now. Can't seem to put this book down. Not even to watch my favourite TV series.
Jan 03, 2017 06:54AM Add a comment
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Kynthos-the-Archer (Kyn)
Kynthos-the-Archer (Kyn) is 9% done
Urgh, mind-control is not what I like in my erotica. It makes non-con situations less fun.
Jan 03, 2017 04:51AM Add a comment
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Kynthos-the-Archer (Kyn)
Kynthos-the-Archer (Kyn) is 7% done
Their reaction to tasting his peculiar blood for the first time was kinda anticlimax. I hope there's is more in stored. I supposed that is a given. I am anxious for it.
Jan 03, 2017 04:38AM Add a comment
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Kynthos-the-Archer (Kyn)
Kynthos-the-Archer (Kyn) is 5% done
Expecting a vampire to respect my modesty is absolutely absurd. One doesn't care much about the chicken's sensibilities when one plucks it.
Jan 02, 2017 11:47PM Add a comment
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Kynthos-the-Archer (Kyn)
Kynthos-the-Archer (Kyn) is 3% done
I am thoroughly enjoying all these blood connoisseur talk. Pretty interesting concept. I bet Mr Paranoid here is the holly grail of yummy blood for blood suckers. I am excited and feeling very evil right now.
Jan 02, 2017 09:50PM Add a comment
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Kynthos-the-Archer (Kyn)
Kynthos-the-Archer (Kyn) is starting
So I climbed awkwardly into the back of her cart and laid my laptop case across my thighs like some sort of electronic armor for my wilting privates. Yes, I felt like less than a man at that point. You would too if you were totally out of control of your situation with everything spiraling towards some epic shitdom.

- This writer is fun to read. Very humorous. XD
Jan 02, 2017 09:29PM Add a comment
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Kynthos-the-Archer (Kyn)
Kynthos-the-Archer (Kyn) is starting
That prologue sounds like so much fun in stored for me to discover. Invincible vamiores but not immortal. Nice.
Jan 02, 2017 09:11PM Add a comment
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Trix
Trix is on page 445 of 594
Vestalar can hypnotise. And right after reliving the horrors at the mansion, George jumps back to consolidate his relationship with Wally. Yes, because that makes so much sense...
Sep 15, 2014 12:21PM Add a comment
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Trix
Trix is on page 395 of 594
Where is all this love for Wally coming from? At the start of the story the guy was barely mentioned and George was straight.
Sep 15, 2014 10:47AM Add a comment
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Trix
Trix is on page 380 of 594
I'm rooting for Jeffrey so all this playing around with Wally does NOT sit well with me.
Sep 15, 2014 10:17AM Add a comment
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